*nods* More than a red pen, even - it could have been a good book, but EVERY SINGLE THING that happened needed about three times as much foreshadowing and explanation as it got! O_O It needed to be a much, much, much longer book and THEN get a red pen taken to it. ;P
Also, needed either awesome ladies or none at all. :P
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Also, needed either awesome ladies or none at all. :P