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justice_turtle ([personal profile] justice_turtle) wrote in [community profile] readallthenewberys 2012-09-29 10:41 pm (UTC)

*nods* More than a red pen, even - it could have been a good book, but EVERY SINGLE THING that happened needed about three times as much foreshadowing and explanation as it got! O_O It needed to be a much, much, much longer book and THEN get a red pen taken to it. ;P

Also, needed either awesome ladies or none at all. :P

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